A lil' adventure with Mario

[lukalukalakitu]

This is hopefully my first hack that I want to be submitted onto SmwCentral.

The story is basic (not peach is kidnapped)
You have moved to the outer reigon of Dinosaur land with Yoshi, One day yoshi went out but never came back. Something came through the post from Yoshi saying that he is lost in the Dark woods. You must find him.

I have started working on the levels but I don't have enough to show as of you.
I can show the submaps so far. (they still need some work on):

World 1 is almost finished and still needs some work:


World 1 with all events done:


World 2 (W.I.P) sneek peek:


Please could you highlight any problems so I can fix them, Thank you.

- luka

[peteyboo]

Well that bridge looks a little weird if it's there before connecting to (I assume) World 2. I haven't done much overworld editing, so other than that, I can't say much other than that it looks good.

[lukalukalakitu]

Why thank you!

[lukalukalakitu]

I haven't been able to work on this for awhile thanks to GSCE's and stuff, so soon I will be able to get some things in.

[lukalukalakitu]

Oh bugger! I have screwed this up badly! I pallied a patch and it went wrong and I can't get rid of the patch for some reason......sorry!

[limepie20]

That's why you make backups before patching.

[lukalukalakitu]

I forgot to do that so yer, I do sometimes screw up sometimes... better thank before acting next time.....