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[AOD] wrote:I've read through what you have so far. It's got potential, I can see you're going somewhere with this. Being absolutely honest, the art could use a lot of improvement but, like, right where you are at this moment, it's better than 60% of the webcomics out there. Like, the sailing ship on page #11 was really nicely done, good perspective and detail. I wanna see more of that! And I'm sure that as time passes, your artist will improve her skills greatly.
BUT! Two major pieces of advice:
- I like to see comics on the actual front page. Having to click to get to the actual first comic is a bit of a SLIGHT extra annoyance that you don't need to give to your readers.
- Jpeg compression! The compression and Jpeg artifacts on page 11 really destroys the niceness of the page. I'd like to see much higher resolutions: have her save it at maximum quality. Or save it as high-resolution .png files. Also, you may want to shrink it so that it fits on most computer screens and browsers -- somewhere around 700-1000 pixels wide would be best.
Keep at it!
!~[AOD]


Thanks again for the advice! Shley is trying a new way of going about the page layout/coloring/compression and so forth, so hopefully we'll gradually get a bit more up to snuff.[AOD] wrote:That's much much better!
!~[AOD]





We have enough plot and dialogue written out to last a few months, actually. I spent a few entirely sleepless nights before we put up the site just... burning through dialogue and story arcs, how they interconnect and who was where during what character wise.[AOD] wrote:Aww, too bad about the hiatus.
That's why you should write like ten or twenty pages of script beforehand! It's almost always true that it takes less time to write than to draw a comic, so you should have it fairly written out before so your artist has something to work on if you have to pull a hiatus from writing.
Hope you come back soon!!
!~[AOD]










