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So go check it out! I'm just a writer, but my good friend is the artist, and the story is excellent. Says the writer <.<

http://thievesgold.smackjeeves.com/
http://jinxxrr.deviantart.com/
http://justpoprocks.deviantart.com/

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http://i45.tinypic.com/28v9kzp.jpg
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Character pages for Iain O'Shea and Anekt Zuri! Yaaay!
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And then there was a new post.

BEHOLD- A piece of supplementary artisticalness for the webcomic we all know as Thieves Gold
(And if you don't know it, just Click Right Here and enjoy!

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New page will be up soon on our website Right Here

Here's a teaser image! (And yes, it will be fully colored when it is uploaded hopefully tomorrow!)

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I've read through what you have so far. It's got potential, I can see you're going somewhere with this. Being absolutely honest, the art could use a lot of improvement but, like, right where you are at this moment, it's better than 60% of the webcomics out there. Like, the sailing ship on page #11 was really nicely done, good perspective and detail. I wanna see more of that! And I'm sure that as time passes, your artist will improve her skills greatly.

BUT! Two major pieces of advice:

- I like to see comics on the actual front page. Having to click to get to the actual first comic is a bit of a SLIGHT extra annoyance that you don't need to give to your readers.

- Jpeg compression! The compression and Jpeg artifacts on page 11 really destroys the niceness of the page. I'd like to see much higher resolutions: have her save it at maximum quality. Or save it as high-resolution .png files. Also, you may want to shrink it so that it fits on most computer screens and browsers -- somewhere around 700-1000 pixels wide would be best.

Keep at it!

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[AOD] wrote:I've read through what you have so far. It's got potential, I can see you're going somewhere with this. Being absolutely honest, the art could use a lot of improvement but, like, right where you are at this moment, it's better than 60% of the webcomics out there. Like, the sailing ship on page #11 was really nicely done, good perspective and detail. I wanna see more of that! And I'm sure that as time passes, your artist will improve her skills greatly.

BUT! Two major pieces of advice:

- I like to see comics on the actual front page. Having to click to get to the actual first comic is a bit of a SLIGHT extra annoyance that you don't need to give to your readers.

- Jpeg compression! The compression and Jpeg artifacts on page 11 really destroys the niceness of the page. I'd like to see much higher resolutions: have her save it at maximum quality. Or save it as high-resolution .png files. Also, you may want to shrink it so that it fits on most computer screens and browsers -- somewhere around 700-1000 pixels wide would be best.

Keep at it!

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Thanks! I'll pass on the advice! It's awesome that people are reading it to begin with 8]

Also there's this

Commercial Thing

Edit: I'm aware I am not the greatest videomaker, this was just made for the handful of people that check for comic updates on facebook (feel free to add me by the by), and I figured I'd post it here /shrug)
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Alrighty, I tweaked the site settings so the Home Page is set to the first page of the comic; as opposed to the News/Updates page; which is still linked at the top navigation panel.

That a bit easier to get into? =x

Lookit Here and offer advice/feedback! I've never managed a website before this one, so it's sorta a learning experience for me. Html is fun <.<
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That's much much better!

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[AOD] wrote:That's much much better!

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Thanks again for the advice! Shley is trying a new way of going about the page layout/coloring/compression and so forth, so hopefully we'll gradually get a bit more up to snuff.
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Update! Sorry it took so long everypeople, but the new page is up!~

In response to recent advice, the artist has scaled down the page and removed that pesky compression fuzz! Go check it out!

http://thievesgold.smackjeeves.com/comics/

(Flashbacks are fun!)
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It's looking a lot better already!

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ALSO!

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My artist friend Shley has a solo project, called Peace Out (Peace Out of Chaos); that is entirely different from TG but you should still check it out, if you can! I actually have nothing to do with this one (other than making a cameo as the villain Dr. Jinx later in the series), but it's pretty cool.

http://peaceout.smackjeeves.com/

Leave her comments!

Just a few of the characters:
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Just a heads up. Um, due to... IRL things, I may not be updating/monitoring this thread quite as much soon. I need to get away from where I am and clear my head and all that kinda crap you guys don't wanna hear about, so... I'll leave you with this.

A very, very sincere thank you, to everyone who's read TG; if only for a moment, and especially to those who have offered advice/comments on the site or on the talkhaus. I can't express really how much it means to me, to see something I've made be... recognized. I know that a hundred or so readers is really no big deal on the Internet, but to me, it's a huge milestone. I know this site is raocow's gig, and we're all here because we're fans of his videos and comic; but that you guys would take time out of your day to look at my stuff... heh. It's really awesome.

So yeah. On hiatus, I guess. You know how it goes, when stuff gets a bit too heavy, lol. Ill go ahead and throw some pics in this post or something so it's not just a random bump, and to pretend like I have content... also, I feel I should let ya' know that the new page will be up here in a day or two; Shley is already coloring it.

Thanks again, everyone. You're all awesome.

EDIT: another picture for selfpromotions sake

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Aww, too bad about the hiatus.

That's why you should write like ten or twenty pages of script beforehand! It's almost always true that it takes less time to write than to draw a comic, so you should have it fairly written out before so your artist has something to work on if you have to pull a hiatus from writing.

Hope you come back soon!!

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[AOD] wrote:Aww, too bad about the hiatus.

That's why you should write like ten or twenty pages of script beforehand! It's almost always true that it takes less time to write than to draw a comic, so you should have it fairly written out before so your artist has something to work on if you have to pull a hiatus from writing.

Hope you come back soon!!

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We have enough plot and dialogue written out to last a few months, actually. I spent a few entirely sleepless nights before we put up the site just... burning through dialogue and story arcs, how they interconnect and who was where during what character wise.

Fret not, TG will continue uninterrupted by my presence- proving that I am the least important part of the system, haha! There will be no thread updates, most likely, and I won't be able to tweak the site (unless she learns html in the next two days) but the story itself will proceed on schedule.

Thanks for the support, AOD!
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Ohhh I see! Well great! I look forward to seeing where this goes.

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There's... a lot that's going to go on. We're starting out slow establishing the primary two characters, yeah; but there are a lot of things happening soon.

Including the exciting prison escape, that I promise you will be worth reading!

Anyway! I said I was on hiatus, so on hiatus I will go. Damn compulsory post-checking >.<

It's addicting.

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Oh whoops looks like I'm back.

AND WITH A NEW LOVIN' PAGE FOR YOUR EYEBALLS

Go look at it right now! It'll be worth it! As always, we love comments/suggestions!

Click This Shiny Goodness

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Another bonus image! While not related to the comic, this just shows why Shley is the artist and I'm just the writer! Hahah!

(Note- deviantart user Ohps did the line art, all i did was color da' damn thing)

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Look at who got a little ahead of themselves! We'll be wearing these at cons when doing promotions and such, later on once we're more set up.

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That is pretty awesome, Jinxrr!

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I thought it was pretty neat! And it's comfier than hell.

Oya, comic thread. New page will be up shortly! Shley was streaming her work on the newest page last night, and she's a day or two away from getting it upload-ready!

And I think that's splendous.
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New Page!

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More piratey goodness!

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UPDATE BE LATE.

But check this out- we have tons of new pages for you guys to look at! And read!

Also, I wrote an editorial thingy about our creation process, if anyone's into reading!

CHECK THIS OUT:

Comic with NEW PAGE GOODNESS

Editorial with TASTY FACTUALS

And our bonus image for this update!
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HEY! We have a Valentines Day update, just for you guys.

Love just flows off these two, doesn't it?

Be sure to check it out, and come back often for more pages uploaded soon!

Remember- We here at ShleyJinx Enterprises <3 you.
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