Script drafts and chatlogs for each world:
World 0, World 1, World 2, World 3, World 4, World 5, World 6, World 7, World 8, World 9, Hub/R.E.T.C.O.N.
So here's how we're generally going to go about things:
- After discussing a given cutscene or set of cutscenes on Skype, one person will draft up a script on pastebin and post a link to it in this thread with a short summary of what happens.
- After folks have given enough feedback here in this thread, another writer whips up a revision of the script based on that feedback and posts the new version here for review. If no other writer steps up to revise the script within a week or two of the draft being posted, the the same writer may write the revision.
- Once a script has had at least two one revision and been approved by SAJ, we can start making the scene in SMBX. Any cutscenes made without going through the revision process will be modified to match the approved script.
- Further discussion can still be had after a script is approved, and if something happens that necessitates a revision (i.e. a major plot point is changed or a castle/boss is replaced) the related script(s) will go back through the review process.
To start us off, here's the first drafts for the cutscenes related to Broadsword's subplot with Iris:
EOW3-1 cutscenes, draft 1
Broadsword meets up with the heroes and asks them to help him search a temple for a powerful artifact and they split up. Iris and Kood distrust Broadsword but Demo goes on ahead, later meeting up with her uncle. While they wait for the rest of the crew to show up the two have a friendly over for a super leek Broadsword found, and after Demo wins Broadsword confides in her that he and the other Uncles are planning something.
EOW6 cutscenes, draft 1
Iris chases after and confronts Broadsword, who is appalled by the other Uncles' corrupting the world. He reveals the Uncles' plan to restore the cyclops race and tries to stop Iris and Demo form getting any further involved, but Iris is eager to take out her resentment on Broadsword for being neglected in favor of Demo. After the two fight, the other Uncles arrive and Broadsword questions their plan, leading Pumpernickel, Rewind and Denmark to continue the plan without him and @sbestos.