Episode 2 Level Review and Testing Discussion
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Erm... I don't wanna be annoyng but i just wanted to ask if my level (Frightening factory) needs to be re-reviewed, since SaJewers told me to move my level to another wiki list.
Sorry in advance if i'm bothering you guys...
Sorry in advance if i'm bothering you guys...
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Re: Episode 2 Review Thread
decided to stream some level reviews for a bit: http://twitch.tv/sajewers
done: www.twitch.tv/sajewers/v/18344597
done: www.twitch.tv/sajewers/v/18344597
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Ectoplasmania by Holy.
Verdict: Reject.
Verdict: Reject.
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Aight I'm gonna go back and look at this.ztarwuff wrote:Ectoplasmania by Holy.
Verdict: Reject.
time passes
SAJewers wrote:
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Really? You're going to filter out the one character I could actually complete the level with easily? Personally, I think you should filter out Iris and Sheath only.Holy wrote:Aight I'm gonna go back and look at this.
time passes
SAJewers wrote:
No, I didn't hear that one. I only heard the one noise and thought it was the drying off one.
Re: Episode 2 Review Thread
Yeah, I dunno, I don't want the level to be too easy. I want the obstacles to take at least some practice to get down which is why there's no easy way to die save on the last two.
Can anyone else see if that "warning noise" before the sparkles dry off is working or not? I think I got all my lunars and dee-el-els updated.
Can anyone else see if that "warning noise" before the sparkles dry off is working or not? I think I got all my lunars and dee-el-els updated.
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ok, i updated the level to use your fixed images
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castlepokemetroid wrote:ping
Bubble Trouble by roundthewheel [Rejected]roundthewheel wrote:ping
Shoe Zone 3 by castlepokemetroid [Accepted]
Sorry about the audio screwups in Bubble Trouble. If you need clarification for what I said, just ask.
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Can't edit the wiki thanks to wikia maintenance, so
Pyro wrote:A Field of Goopas
StraightFlame wrote:Retarded Volcano
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Alright, I've just outright removed the secret exit - it was a dumb choice anyways. I shifted over the time switch as you suggested and fixed all the block holes.SAJewers wrote:field of goopers 1 review
I'm really not sure what to do about the "this joke has been done before" thing, though. I was dead set on making a Chaos Complexx reference with this level, and I've never even played ASMBXT so I don't know what "A Terrible Level" is. I'm honestly not sure what to do...I'll update the level tomorrow and wait for more reviews.
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Thanks for the review SAJewers. Sorry for the things that didn't really work out. I updated the level to address most of those issues:SAJewers wrote:OK, just tested this myself.SAJewers wrote:Can I get a review on these 2 levels:
Jappio - A Lock's Fate (There appears to be a blue sack. Is that collectable? Is there a filter? If not, reject it)
Jappio - A Lock's Fate
https://www.mediafire.com/?excz6mca3l4xt12
I didn't fix the music though, as the music choices are meant to match the moods of the different stages of grief. It's part of the theme-ing. However, if that reasoning isn't good enough, I'd be happy to change it.
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Oh, and completely side point, I updated my level that had previously been "Pierce the Heavens". There was a level in the previous episode or something if I recall with the same name. So here is the new one:
Jappio - The Lights in the Sky
https://www.mediafire.com/?excz6mca3l4xt12
This one has been tested by others so far, but extra reviews are of course welcomed if someone really wanted to.
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Re: Episode 2 Review Thread
Just going to say, I appreciate how you kept the reference in a much less obvious way.Jappio wrote: Jappio - The Lights in the Sky
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Muwha by Franky:
Reject.
Also, can anybody figure out why the wikia page isn't linking to the page I created for Franky's level? The link keeps saying the page doesn't exist.
Reject.
Also, can anybody figure out why the wikia page isn't linking to the page I created for Franky's level? The link keeps saying the page doesn't exist.
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...Isn't that song copyrighted?Pyro wrote:The Duckpocalypse by Skulldug13 [Rejected]
EDIT: looking at the wiki page for it, I'm questioning the useability of some of the songs used.
Also, you don't have to just test as Demo. Feel free to use anther character, or start off with another powerup/mount
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I didn't recognize it, but if it is, that's one more strike against the level...SAJewers wrote:...Isn't that song copyrighted?Pyro wrote:The Duckpocalypse by Skulldug13 [Rejected]
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Well, if "Epic Sax Guy" isn't, "X Files Theme" surely must be.
A more expanded list for you guys (Pyro feel free to use this list too):
Dangtater - War Machine
Franky - Muwha
InvisibleSandwhich - Goo's Gym
Mari0s0 - Layer Shenanigans
KarateKid5 - Starlight Resort Grand Reopening
LV27MarkerMMan - Odd Boss Rush
yesimbill - Blocky Interlude
Holy - Ectoplasmania
PikkaRose - Sky Fleet
Alpherio - Arctic Fissure
duvi0 - Iceberg Backyard
Cadwyn/SAJewers - Hope Rides Alone
StraightFlame - Retarded Volcano
SAJewers - LP Production Factory
pholtos wrote:I guess I could help.
Voltgloss wrote:I don't have video capability at the moment but I'm happy and interested to prepare written/screenshot reviews. SAJewers, if there are particular ones you'd like me to tackle, please let me know; otherwise I'll pull a few randomly chosen ones (not the same ones you asked Pholtos to review) and identify them here in advance so people know which ones I'm starting on.
A more expanded list for you guys (Pyro feel free to use this list too):
Dangtater - War Machine
Franky - Muwha
InvisibleSandwhich - Goo's Gym
Mari0s0 - Layer Shenanigans
KarateKid5 - Starlight Resort Grand Reopening
LV27MarkerMMan - Odd Boss Rush
yesimbill - Blocky Interlude
Holy - Ectoplasmania
PikkaRose - Sky Fleet
Alpherio - Arctic Fissure
duvi0 - Iceberg Backyard
Cadwyn/SAJewers - Hope Rides Alone
StraightFlame - Retarded Volcano
SAJewers - LP Production Factory
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I'm not getting any content ID matches on the video, just to let you know.SAJewers wrote:stuff
Also, Steve and George Go On Parade already got rejected by 3 people I think. It's in the rejected list, at least.
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7NameSam wrote:Irradiated Ice
This level was really nice and pretty, and also maybe a little mean. I think it pretty much good to go. Approved by me.WestonSmith wrote:Sea Side Slumber
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For the Undertale song: Being an indie game, I doubt it would get flagged, but confirmation would be nice.Willhart wrote:7NameSam wrote:Irradiated Ice
For the Ristar song: dude, use the vgm, don't use an ogg, you're just inflating the filesize for no reason.
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For the undertale song, I checked on the bandcamp page, and it said "All rights reserved" at the bottom, and I figured I would be better safe than sorry.SAJewers wrote: For the Undertale song: Being an indie game, I doubt it would get flagged, but confirmation would be nice.
For the Ristar song: dude, use the vgm, don't use an ogg, you're just inflating the filesize for no reason.
for the ristar song, I didn't even know what a vgm was before you said I should of used one?
where or how do you get a .vgm file?